Space Pulp

It's got colors!
Duh.
Duh.
26th Oct 2012, 10:14 PM in Monkeys
Average Rating: 5 (7 votes)
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I know, you're all shocked. Completely shocked.

This chapter is partly about establishing Iri's level of strength, and part of that is establishing that she is, in fact, quite strong.

But... she's not invincible.
User comments:
cattservant
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cattservant
She's tough on her uniforms too!
Sheela
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Sheela
Well, they had it coming !

The uniforms I mean .. they tried to display her butt as fat !
Dan (Guest)
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I like how you managed to display shock and awe in an insectoid's head.
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I wasn't sure whether I should or not...
Bob (Guest)
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It worked well.
Centcomm
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Centcomm
heh I LOVE the effect you used to show her sword movements .. excellent job! *claps*
also how many Gee's is she under at this point?
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That's a really cheap effect. Just flat color at 70% alpha, layered a few times.
Centcomm
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Centcomm
still it works really well ..
Razingthebar (Guest)
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Did anyone else notice not only did Iri free herself she also wrapped a wire around one of the insectoids?
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I wasn't sure if it was too subtle.
cattservant
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cattservant
She wants something, if she is taking hostages...
If the going rate is a million a finger, how much is a nose full of Ixogen?
Bellar (Guest)
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Is everyone done with commenting on the implied gravity, or did no one want to be the first to comment on Iri's butt sagging?
cattservant
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cattservant
Not good to irritate the Poison Monkey!
Iamari (Guest)
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I'm curious about where she was keeping her Light Saber(?), Beam Saber(?), Sword Of Light(?), Energy Blade(?). Stop me when this gets annoying.
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She just left it back in the hotel.
Sheela
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Sheela
Being able to teleport your sword to your hand means never having to carry it around unless you want to. :)
zombiederf (Guest)
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IMO, I like the whole cliche of stuff hiding between breasts myself.
Sheela
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Sheela
*blink*


ooOooooooooohhh .... breast hidey spaces !

Imagine, a species with extra large breasts that can hide stuff in them!

Now this has to happen!
Iamari (Guest)
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Like instead of Acme Black Holes they have infinite cleavage.
Sheela
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Sheela
Greater Cleavage ! :D
Undead H3r3tic
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Undead H3r3tic
Damn look at that sumbitch go, he haulin' ass!

He come by my house, I kill it!

That little bug thing just got jinked!

Damn Swordysword, you scary!
Inuyuru
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damn son