Space Pulp

cattservant 22nd Oct 2012, 10:31 PM

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An excellent page noir!
Thank You.

(Wouldn't all those hallucinogens impede whatever it is that 'the monster' is trying to do?)

view 22nd Oct 2012, 10:32 PM

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Yeah, if he had some kind of clear goal.

cattservant 22nd Oct 2012, 10:39 PM

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Fear and Loathing on "Smuggler's Star"...

Bellar (Guest) 22nd Oct 2012, 10:37 PM

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Quick Ayata! Now's your chance to do something unpredictable!

Honk Iri's boob; no wait!

Honk Iri's nose; no wait!

Do something that's meant to be reassuring, but because of differences in culture and species gives Iri the wrong impression and kicks off a comic-spanning romance!

Yea, that last one!

view 22nd Oct 2012, 10:49 PM

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Oh my gosh I totally forgot to write lesbian sex into this chapter.

Well, maybe later.

Bellar (Guest) 23rd Oct 2012, 1:10 AM

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Oh, view~!

You're so wacky and unpredictable I can't tell if that's a joke or you being serious.

cattservant 23rd Oct 2012, 1:37 AM

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"Yes!"

Razingthebar (Guest) 23rd Oct 2012, 4:23 AM

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I see you remember yesterday's lesson.

Sheela 23rd Oct 2012, 12:43 PM

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I think I could get behind "honk Iri's boob" though.

Zaranthan (Guest) 23rd Oct 2012, 3:08 PM

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One does not simply... "forget" to write in lesbian sex.

Phuji 22nd Oct 2012, 10:42 PM

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Something about Iri and the colors in that last panel. Awesome work today.

view 22nd Oct 2012, 10:49 PM

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Hmm, it's kinda wobbly-paced and wibbly-lighted, but I learned a lot.

cattservant 23rd Oct 2012, 1:20 AM

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The more I look at it, the more I think panel five would make a fine portrait without the speech bubble.

view 23rd Oct 2012, 2:05 AM

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It's a really cheap trick. I've always wanted to try it.

Sheela 23rd Oct 2012, 12:44 PM

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It came out pretty well too. :)

Also, Panel 3 is awesome as well, loving the shade on the hair.

Centcomm 23rd Oct 2012, 1:42 AM

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really nicely done there :D I like panel 6 myself !

cattservant 23rd Oct 2012, 1:51 AM

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I'm not sure I counted correctly. I'm referring to the small panel on the bottom left.
Very pulp noir.

Rainbows1701 (Guest) 23rd Oct 2012, 4:46 AM

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I really like what you did with panel 6 -- also, Iri can start fires with her pinky?

Also going back through the comic and reading the comments definitely make things make a bit more sense.

view 23rd Oct 2012, 12:33 PM

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Awww.... what was unclear?

Sheela 23rd Oct 2012, 12:46 PM

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"yes". :)

G-Rock 23rd Oct 2012, 7:06 AM

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Fun with shadows!

Is Iri lighting her cig with her pinkie?

Panel 5 is nice. Reduction is fun to do, but not always easy.

view 23rd Oct 2012, 12:33 PM

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Yes! Introducing another Iri power: the ability to create teeny-weenie fires.

She's a psycher, after all...

Sheela 23rd Oct 2012, 12:41 PM

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She has done this before on page 12. :)
We also talked about it in the comments on that page, using theories like "Using coalescenced anger she convinces the air around the whitestix to give in to the heat of a million suns!" and View just said "Magic" ... pfft.

View also claimed he would not shade Iri as good as I did back then due to time constraints, and now, on this page, he's kicking my ass up and down the spacewalk! I feel so inadequate now. :(

view 23rd Oct 2012, 1:10 PM

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These faces are all three-stroke shading.

Sheela 23rd Oct 2012, 1:43 PM

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Well, it's turning out some pretty good results, I think.
I'm particularly in love with her hair in panel 3 ... you nailed it in that frame. :)

Well, whan I say nailed I don't mean with a hammer and nails, offcourse ... that would be .. bloody.

Ugh, my mind just went an unpleasant place. :(