Truckin
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10th Sep 2012, 11:41 PM
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That t-shirt again!
Iri's let her hair up again. Tres Chic!
Iri's let her hair up again. Tres Chic!
11th Sep 2012, 12:01 AM
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She didn't have much choice, it was clear it was going to be mussed.
10th Sep 2012, 11:41 PM
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When I look at the last three panels, I think disco-afro-cop-women from cheesy disco-afro-cop films from the 70's.
10th Sep 2012, 11:44 PM
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That's pretty much the whole Poison Monkey species. It's just that Iri isn't very Poison Monkeyish. She'd be the Carlton of the Poison Monkeys, if you know what I mean.
11th Sep 2012, 4:11 AM
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Wait... what?
No, I just can not wrap my head around Iri being to poison monkey's, what Carlton is to Will. That is just...
*Starts flailing arms around and singing*
"It's not unuuuusual!..."
*Head Explodes*
No, I just can not wrap my head around Iri being to poison monkey's, what Carlton is to Will. That is just...
*Starts flailing arms around and singing*
"It's not unuuuusual!..."
*Head Explodes*
11th Sep 2012, 4:25 AM
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Oh, Man, Iri is so uncool it's not even funny. She's so uncool that she kind of... wraps back around again, you know?
I mean, she runs around in Temple underwear all the time with her hair all permed down, and she never does anything theatrical...
I mean, she runs around in Temple underwear all the time with her hair all permed down, and she never does anything theatrical...
11th Sep 2012, 1:21 PM
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Never does anything theatrical ?
You mean, like, crashing a survival pod into a lake ?
Fight a goddess to the death ?
Bust out of jail ?
You mean, like, crashing a survival pod into a lake ?
Fight a goddess to the death ?
Bust out of jail ?
11th Sep 2012, 5:35 PM
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I've been in love with poison monkeys since you first described them. They're pretty much the best race ever.
11th Sep 2012, 8:56 PM
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It'll still be a while before you see them, but they play a pretty major part in the story.
11th Sep 2012, 12:38 AM
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excellent page Ayata's expression in the last panel is just pure shock! :D irls all "its ok "
11th Sep 2012, 12:45 AM
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"Hey, I've saved LOADS of planets, babe. No worries, right?"
11th Sep 2012, 3:55 AM
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And then Ayata gets on Iri's star-motorcycle and then the ride off into the stars.
11th Sep 2012, 1:22 PM
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Heh, I think ayata finally figured out how big the stakes really are.
Light Tank fire indeed ... just wait until she sees heavy artillery fire, it'll mess with her mind.
Light Tank fire indeed ... just wait until she sees heavy artillery fire, it'll mess with her mind.
11th Sep 2012, 2:13 AM
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Now THAT is some good character design. I love it!
Also I'm left handed, no one has been able to read what I write since I learned to form words.
Also I'm left handed, no one has been able to read what I write since I learned to form words.
11th Sep 2012, 2:52 AM
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The color on the last three panels, very nice. Depth and curves, perfect compliments to your art. The glare of Iri's eyes through the sunglasses, nice touch.
11th Sep 2012, 2:54 AM
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Thanks. I really liked the eye glow and the feel of the gradients in those panels.
11th Sep 2012, 4:20 AM
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This page looks fantastic View. Iri's hair looks particularly good. With the multiple layers of colours and thick lines. And I have to agree with the commenter above, the geen eyes shining through the glasses is a great touch. And Ayatas expressions are hilarious.
11th Sep 2012, 5:20 AM
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Agreeing with dragon. The last three panels are pretty fucking fantastic.
... My handwriting is terrible today.