Space Pulp

It's got colors!
Spy
Spy
3rd Sep 2012, 8:03 PM in Jungle
Average Rating: 5 (7 votes)
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Hmmm. Not at all happy with panel 1.

Last page, how different was Iri from the backdrop? On one of my monitors, she and the sky were both pitch black. On the other, she was kind of a darkish-gray.

Sigh.
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Nightsky
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Nightsky
Last page, I could tell the difference. Iri was gray, the night sky was blue.
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I'll have to be more careful...
cattservant
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cattservant
Iri's silhouette was the same color as Jagi's backpack on this end. Sky was midnight blue. Which color scheme was supposed to be correct?

Hooray for clean laundry too!
elfolampo
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elfolampo
I wonder if Ayata is about to get electrocuted.
Centcomm
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Centcomm
she looked fine last page - same here .. didnt really notice. she was easy to distingush
Phuji
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Phuji
Not sure how helpful this is but http://imgur.com/sRd3i is as I see it.

Iri and Jagi's backpack are dark grey, sky is a dark blue. Same colors on both of my monitors, though on one the sky is tinted a bit darker.

Also, Yay for naked Ayata!
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That's not helpful at all, because the whole problem is how it looks on different monitors!
Phuji
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Phuji
Well.... then it seems that it looks the same to me and everyone else no matter the monitor. Grey Iri/Backpack and a dark blue sky.
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Yeah, I've tweaked my monitor settings to more accurately reflect what you guys' settings are.
cattservant
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cattservant
Nice, nice, very nice
Nice, nice, very nice
So many people in the same device
Meh.Aloe (Guest)
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My name is Yon Yonson,
I come from Wisconsin.
I work in a lumber yard there.
Guest (Guest)
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If you have a good printer, you can use it to calibrate your monitor.
Bellar (Guest)
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What was the intended appearance of Iri last page? Dark gray or black?
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Black.
pkrankow
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pkrankow
hmm. I got dark grey on 2 different computers here.
Undead H3r3tic
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Undead H3r3tic
I'm sorry, but I couldn't help but play this in my head when I saw this page...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ye8KvYKn9-0
pensivedragon
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pensivedragon
ARG! You evil, evil tease. Why must the most interesting stuff be going on in the background?! :D

Art wise, panels 1 and 4 are my favourite on this page. Panel one for the excellent detail, and panel four for the nice composition and lighting.

Colourwise, almost everything looks great. I love the little touch of the shadows in the doorway's spilling light in panel 4. As well as the detail on the purple guys "hoods" and the crates.

My only criticism of this page would be Iri's hair. It is likely a moot point, as it is constantly evolving anyway. But this particular version kinda looks like a helmet to me, due to its unusually strong reflective properties. Especially since, going off of panel 4, there is actually no light shining directly at/on Iri on her little perch, other than starlight.
Dan (Guest)
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Must... zoom... in... on... background...
lorddarke
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lorddarke
I really have no interest in "star wars" type stories, but damn your GOOD at it! I find myself unable to stop reading it!
Well done!
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Ah, the highest praise. "I HATE THIS KIND OF SHIT except when you do it"