Space Pulp

And we wear shoes

28th Aug 2012, 10:23 PM in Jungle

Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)

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view 28th Aug 2012, 10:23 PM

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Experimenting with really aggressive coloration.

User comments:

cattservant 28th Aug 2012, 10:59 PM

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It looks clear and coherent to me. How do you feel you're succeeding?

cattservant 28th Aug 2012, 11:05 PM

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Why am I not surprised that Jagi has practical footwear for the situation!
Ayata seems right at home.

Centcomm 29th Aug 2012, 1:58 AM

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I think its really good - getting better all the time :D

cattservant 29th Aug 2012, 2:14 AM

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(As In?)

Centcomm 29th Aug 2012, 2:16 AM

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I guess so :D

cattservant 29th Aug 2012, 2:20 AM

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Good song, but not fully appropriate to the situation now I think about it.

Never mind!

view 29th Aug 2012, 2:30 AM

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I always pictured it more like this:

youtu.be/LEcsgbwBFRs

pensivedragon 29th Aug 2012, 2:28 AM

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I am on a different computer at the moment, so I can not be 100% sure. But the colouring looks great to me. I also like the added touch of the bottom panel filling the whole page, and the top 3 panels layered over top of it.

The muck looks especially nice/nasty.

view 29th Aug 2012, 2:33 AM

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Hm. Mud's always tough.

cattservant 29th Aug 2012, 2:49 AM

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I suspect you might be planing on working on it for a few pages...

view 29th Aug 2012, 2:54 AM

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I don't know if I'll be planing it. Lumpy mud is generally okay.

pensivedragon 30th Aug 2012, 2:33 AM

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For clarity, I meant you did a very nice job of depicting nasty looking mud. The mild rainbow of colours give it a wonderfully evil oily/slimy appearance and the consistency, and sound effects bear that out into a horrible bootsnatching squelching mess. I almost hate to say it of something as mundane as mud, but I think it is one of my favorite colouring jobs of yours so far.

cattservant 29th Aug 2012, 3:09 AM

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It just occurred to me that today's page is the first time Ayata has been seen wearing her hammer-pants since Comic 28.

view 29th Aug 2012, 3:11 AM

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For once it wasn't a continuity error!

cattservant 29th Aug 2012, 3:13 AM

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A fashion statement for certain. She has charming legs too!

exegesis 29th Aug 2012, 4:07 AM

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Hi View!

I've been following your comics for a little while now, and I'm a big fan of your imagination. Just thought I'd introduce myself here. Looking forward to wherever you're taking this story!

view 29th Aug 2012, 4:20 AM

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I'm taking it nowhere! But quickly, and in a big ball of explosives!

Sheela 29th Aug 2012, 3:18 PM

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Nowhere is a popular destination, I hear. :)

Iamari (Guest) 29th Aug 2012, 5:11 AM

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I think the new coloring looks great.

view 29th Aug 2012, 10:06 PM

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Warning: today's comic will be very late, if it shows up at all. Yay infrastructure that hasn't been updated since 1915!

JasperWB 29th Aug 2012, 10:50 PM

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That's my electrical grid right there. From an old (but awesome) dam to an old (but awesome) powerhouse into old (and not awesome) wiring on two or so fuses house.