I wonder how harsh that particular smoke from the White Stix is. I bet it ruins the serenity of an indoor garden there. I was also wondering if anyone would ever touch Jagi. I was thinking maybe he was kind of ethereal in existence. He's quite an interesting character. Definitely awesome though.
Ah, fair enough point. Unevolved, hairy, loud monkeys probably pretty bad in the scope of the galaxy. As long as he finds /something/ he can picture in smutty situations.
This also went slightly different than I had imagined. He seems to have no interest in the naked female in his Garden. She seems more like an irritating cloud of smoke to him on this page.
Are the white things on Jagi's forehead eyes as well, or some other organ? They seem to have lids, as they disappear in panel 3. But they have no blue in them like his 4 "normal" eyes.
The smoke effect is also great on this page. Especially in panels 1 and 5.
I love Jagi's expression in panel 4. And I especially like Iri's unselfconscious posture and attitude in the last panel. Females that are comfortable with their bodies are always so sexy.
Hmmm, Is that a tattoo I spy on the back of Iri's neck?
You should add an awesome inked chick at some point. You, like, need a reason for a huge crowd scene in a city to put a bunch of one time, cool looking characters in.
It could be a cool challenge? Or instead of making it as part of a page for the comic, It could make for a great background in the extras section. That way you could take longer to pick away at it...?
Mind you, if I was gonna actually suggest a new item for the extras section my personal preference would be for a shot of Iri and Ayeta naked in a waterfall or hot springs...
So, not a tattoo eh? Interesting. Too straight and uniform to be scars... Natural skin pigmentation? Doubtful. Implants of some kind will be my guess for the moment.
Re: Tattoos; I think the four dots along her spine are vertebrae and the mark on her right shoulder blade is right where her uniform was torn. Could be a fresh scar.
God lord man, I know Jagi is one of the good guys. Well, at least I hope he is one of them, but damn View. The way his appearance is drawn is down right unsettling and borderline frightening. By no means am I saying Jagi is made poorly, quite the contrary, but is he meant to be this intimidating even when he is not trying to be?
Fucking hair, man....
This also went slightly different than I had imagined. He seems to have no interest in the naked female in his Garden. She seems more like an irritating cloud of smoke to him on this page.
(For the record, I had minor surgery today to remove an unusually long-lasting sty, so yeah.)
Or you could ho ho ho up a bottle of rum!
The smoke effect is also great on this page. Especially in panels 1 and 5.
I love Jagi's expression in panel 4. And I especially like Iri's unselfconscious posture and attitude in the last panel. Females that are comfortable with their bodies are always so sexy.
Hmmm, Is that a tattoo I spy on the back of Iri's neck?
Mind you, if I was gonna actually suggest a new item for the extras section my personal preference would be for a shot of Iri and Ayeta naked in a waterfall or hot springs...
So, not a tattoo eh? Interesting. Too straight and uniform to be scars... Natural skin pigmentation? Doubtful. Implants of some kind will be my guess for the moment.
Oh yeah Jagi is scary ... but it's all about perspective.
also, for some reason, Iri reminds me of Huey Freeman from The Boondocks tv series. I think they'd hit it off too.