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Immunity
Immunity
6th Mar 2013, 12:02 AM in Star
Average Rating: 5 (7 votes)
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Pacing is one of the hardest things in a webcomic, because it might be read one page per day, or all in a glut.

But don't worry, I'm not zooming away from the action. I'm just... PACING!
User comments:
highlander55
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highlander55
We're pacing every day waiting for the next page. Keep up the good work View! 8)
JasperWB
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JasperWB
Look at the Prime Ministers outfit. I just...damn haha. And holding on to Iri and her so very curvaceous rump there..
Kain Yusanagi
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Kain Yusanagi
I hope he has a cravat. :D
pensivedragon
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pensivedragon
I'm not worried, I know from experience that your pacing is fine for both types of reading. And releasing your comic a page a day makes up for any possible pacing hiccup (though none actually come to mind). It is the authors that release comic pages once a week (or less!) that run into HUGE pacing issues. lol.
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That's nice, but I have a lot of pacing issues. Most of my pacing issues stem from the fact that I don't have a script, just a bunch of important plot events. So it's easy to rush or delay overmuch.
Sheela
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Sheela
Luckily, we don't get to see most of those pacing issues because you solve most of them before they ever hit the paper.

Besides, it's a free webcomic based around a pulp format ... there's a definite limit to what one can expect from something like this.

That said, I can safely assure you that the comic has so far delivered very nicely. :)
RandomTroll
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RandomTroll
Next just wants to get back to bed, uh?
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Pretty much.
Sheela
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Sheela
Iri too, probably .. but there's an angry Kax to be made fun of, and who can pass up an opportunity like that ? :)
Centcomm
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Centcomm
wow .. i almost feel sorry for the big guy there >_<
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Hey, just 'cause she's an elephant doesn't mean she's a guy!
Centcomm
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Centcomm
ACH! I didnt not even catch that! >_< OOPS!
Phuji
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Phuji
That is a large woman...

I didn't catch it either due to the lack of any significant feminine characteristics besides the chest which could easily be mistaken for a fat dude.
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She's not particularly feminine.
VlRGlL
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VlRGlL
I honestly laughed at the he tripped comment
Sheela
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Sheela
Ha ha, yeah, that was a pretty funny comment .. though it does raise the question, how many actually died ?

It might be that the Unity soldiers go a little easy on them because they're police.

Then again, maybe not.
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Well, Iri and the PM PM and the film company that makes Iri's films all asked the cops not to engage, but it's kind of an outrageous thing to ask.
Sheela
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Sheela
Outrageous, huh ?

The policemen must have an awesome lifeinsurance then, if they still engages.
Well, either that, or a cracking wedding. :)
VlRGlL
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VlRGlL
Everything Iri related is an insurance nightmare
SpaceMonkey
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SpaceMonkey
It occurs to me that space wizards of Iri's persuasion (future-sight stuff) could be a dick and be sure to ask someone for something in such a way that they'd refuse but you'd be covered later by having asked.

Not that I think that's happened here. Just a thought.
SpaceMonkey
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SpaceMonkey
The last panel makes me curious just how much of the city is now burning, though I suppose that might become clearer next page. :P
Razingthebar (Guest)
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So this is all according to plan then...
klondike (Guest)
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Nice Cliffhanger there :D
Gigan
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Out of curiosity, is that Kax's sword doing the number on that flyer?
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Orbital bombardment, just like against the tank.